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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore 
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Cloud nine Amazing love It happened on that day Energetic vibes of passion First kiss! --------------- Marge's cinquan inspired me in writing this  Love, MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
And inspired it is. Lovely. Joyce |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetMidnightBluesyGal~ Awww, to think I inspired this little beauty is a *tickle* to my heart~ YOU are such a sweetie ... and this is just lovely~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Good job! I enjoyed reading this. Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Hello Joyce, Marge & Betty, Thank you so much for commenting on this, it means alot to me Love, MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
Feels very spontaneous. haha...did you write this just after your first kiss?? cheers |
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Kathy Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 153 |
Ohhhhh...you said so very much...with so very few words! To me....THIS is poetry! Love, Kathy |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
FNG: thank you for reading  this is a reminisce of the first kiss I shared with my boyfriend about 4 years ago. It wasn't a first for us both but it was the most magical and it's still vivid in my memories..Kathy: dear girl thank you for your sweet comments Love, MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
First kisses...I always hope they are memorable. But the great thing is, if they are, you get to practice.  This was a sweet cinquain, Michelle.~ Karen ~ |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Dearest Karen, Thank you so much, I am delighted that you responded Love, MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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desert-spike Member
since 2006-02-01
Posts 194TX/USA |
I agree with Kathy. This IS Definitely poetry. Poetry like poetry should be written. With a passion crazed soul! |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
A lot of passion in a few lines--well done!  ~sky I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying.... ~Tim McGraw [This message has been edited by skyshine (03-13-2006 02:35 AM).] |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Dear desert-spike: I am so glad that you could feel the passion in my writing Dear sky: Thank you so much! It is very encouraging for me to know that  Love, MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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