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whitedove
Junior Member

since 2005-11-26

Posts 42

0 posted 2006-01-12 09:22 PM

I did a painting
It was surreal
Unsure what to do
What to feel

What is this painting
You may ask
What made it such
An extraordinary task

Why does it perplex me so
To consider what it is
Why is it not so ordinary
Why has it got me in a tis?

It started with a puzzle
and finished with you can
It covered my entire life
Covering the entire span

My story is on the net
For all to see and hear
I am unsure what to do
Unsure whether it is clear

Should I sell the painting
Should I give it away
Should I hang it in my hall
Or should I sell it on ebay?

Please give me your suggestions
Because I am perplexed
Just where the heck am I going
What will happen next?

Thanks for reading
Here is the painting for you to have a look at http://artpad.art.com/gallery/?isv8qc1ldl40

It is traumatic for some.

To make it go faster, minimise the writing screens and it will type quicker.

(((((hugs))))))
whitedove

sandgrain
Member Elite

since 1999-09-21

Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA

1 posted 2006-01-13 10:42 PM

I love this write.  Saw the art, too.  That's neat.

   God bless
     Rae

Jim Nasium
Junior Member

since 2006-01-16

Posts 32
Philadelphia Pa USA

2 posted 2006-01-16 08:10 PM

whitedove
Nice work! I enjoyed your poem. I too like otpaint and draw and have tons of my Art on line in my web site... YOU may want to take a look at some'a my work. My work is very surreal like the art mentioned in your poem...
Jim Nasium

My Art: http://www.gymart.com
My Poetry: http://www.gymart.com/poemindex.html
My Books: http://www.lulu.com/jimnasium
Art Sale: http://www.gymart.c

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