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Tramp Poet
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since 2000-01-06
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Could Be Anywhere...

0 posted 2006-01-08 10:59 AM


coming home

her voice sounding small
listening to her tears and fears
her call from so very far away.
arms aching with emptiness
bed cold, lonely and single
missing her laugh, her warmth.

calling from long distance
she cries as she spills
looks like longer she will need.
already been too long, too much
come home, darling... come home
let the rest deal with it's own mess.

waiting at airport; watching; longing
anticipation of being whole, complete
a quiver, a twitter, another and again.
her smile of recognition filling, blossoms
sunshine of her love warming, melting
bodies and lips flow together again.

~~~~~~~


© Copyright 2006 Daniel James Burt - All Rights Reserved
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Member Rara Avis
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1 posted 2006-01-08 01:18 PM


When I saw this I thought it was a retrieved poem from the archives.  What is this? I'm confused and don't know what to say. Joyce
Tramp Poet
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since 2000-01-06
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Could Be Anywhere...
2 posted 2006-01-09 12:51 PM


It is so good to be home I missed you so much...as usual your poetry is so poignant and beautiful...it encourages the reader to think, ponder and seek the mystic just below the surface...
BeaSassy
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since 2005-10-13
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California
3 posted 2006-01-09 12:58 PM


I apologize I inadvertently posted under my husband's profile...

It is so good to be home I missed you so much...as usual your poetry is so poignant and beautiful...it encourages the reader to think, ponder and seek the mystic just below the surface...

What lies behind us and what lies before us are small matters compared to what lies within us.
            Ralph Waldo Emerson

midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore
4 posted 2006-01-10 09:37 AM


Awww so sweet you guys heehee It's the season of love!

Love,
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
5 posted 2006-01-11 06:01 AM


WoW!
very sweet, romatic and heartfelt...lovingly penned.

~hugs~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



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