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Annie78
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0 posted 2006-01-05 08:29 PM


I LOVE YOU MORE

when i was but a kid
i would hear my daddy say
i love you most to my mother
no you don't she would tease
i love you mostest there is no other

a tender love game
they would play
with letters, cards and words
passed down thru the years
and even now past his dying day

it was said to all of us
and to the grandkids too
never quit at I LOVE YOU
my kids would add i love you more
as they would walk out the door

i never thought i would find
someone who knew the game
until tonight when i heard
those very words
from my hearts new flame

as we were ending
our brief talk
about to say goodnight
my heart opened another door
when he said I LOVE YOU MORE!
~~~~~~~~~

JoAnne Burt
1-5-06
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there is but a short time to exist, love,laugh,live and never stop believing in miracles

© Copyright 2006 Joanne Owen - All Rights Reserved
Annie78
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1 posted 2006-01-05 08:33 PM


thank you baby for the inspiration and the words....brought daddy near and a surety that will never be replaced
Annie

there is but a short time to exist, love,laugh,live and never stop believing in miracles

PhaerieChild
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2 posted 2006-01-05 09:04 PM


This is so sweet!! Mike and I play that game too.
Annie78
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3 posted 2006-01-05 09:10 PM


i am so glad...sweetie i never thought he would play the game little lone start it.
Annie

there is but a short time to exist, love,laugh,live and never stop believing in miracles

Joyce Johnson
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4 posted 2006-01-06 02:14 AM


I've played that game and always wanted to be the one who loved the most.  love, Joyce
Annie78
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5 posted 2006-01-06 02:41 AM


Joyce am happy to see that this game is more popular than i thought,i've missed the game since the boys, grandkids, and daddy are gone....feels good to play again.
Annie

there is but a short time to exist, love,laugh,live and never stop believing in miracles

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