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Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2005-12-04 03:58 PM

When the sun came to rise,
My eyes open to your lovely sight,
I couldn’t breathe if you left me now,
Thought about this but a million times,

You are like my life that I never had,
Couldn’t lead it if you weren’t there,
Had my mind made up when I saw you,
Dressed in nothing but pretty red,

Too many days I cried without finding love,
Never knew it came at the right time,
Flown down from heavenly worlds,
Into my heart like a shooting star,

So many of us give up on love too soon,
I was also the one, who sang the same tune,
But you have done so much for me,
Without you, I can’t began to live,

Many others could have been with you today,
But I am glad you chose to stay with me,
Till the end of your days and mine,
I will take care of you even till my dying breath,

You get the love and respect you deserve,
In turn I ask for you not hide your love,
Share it with me today and now,
And make me feel like a flying white dove,

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

1 posted 2005-12-05 12:13 PM

It's pretty cool..
'Been there, done that'..

MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2005-12-05 09:03 PM

Ronil~
You write of love so beautifully~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - [email protected]

whitedove
Junior Member

since 2005-11-26

Posts 42

3 posted 2005-12-06 02:51 AM

love can do such wonderful things.

Thought it was great

Annie78
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 469
here then there then back here

4 posted 2005-12-06 06:19 AM

oh yeah....been there, done that, and got hurt, but going back for more because finally got the right one this time. it's never too late to find your own little slice of heaven, and that is what God wants for us.
Annie

there is but a short time to exist, love,laugh,live and never stop believing in miracles

pictureme2
Member

since 2005-11-13

Posts 194

5 posted 2005-12-06 11:21 PM

loved the ending line of your poem. The best of love...when we can ....uninhibited and trusting our heart, giving and receiving unconditionally!
Enjoyed
pictureme2

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