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Joyce Johnson
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0 posted 2005-11-30 03:59 PM


California Visitors

They made the trip in 99
to say a sad goodbye
to my precious son, whom they loved too,
all we did that time was cry.

In the fall of Two ought ought and three
they came to see the twins.
A happier trip by far was this;
to come when life begins.

And now for this Thanksgiving,
they came to spend the week;
to feast and laugh and banter;
old memories to seek.

Each time they come, each time they go
I feel a stab of pain,
knowing there's no guarantee
we'll live to meet again.

These in-laws and I have reached the age
where nothing is for sure.
One of us will go on first,
the others will endure.

They cannot stand the damp and cold;
I can't abide the heat.
A plane must take us back and forth,
when we decide to meet.

California to Washington
or vice versa, we will fly;
connected by my marriage vows
and friends until we die.

Joyce Johnson/11/30/05


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Annie78
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1 posted 2005-11-30 04:04 PM


Joyce this is lovely and so nice just makes me happy.
Annie

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Martie
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2 posted 2005-11-30 04:11 PM


Joyce

"These in-laws and I have reached the age
where nothing is for sure.
One of us will go on first,
the others will endure."

Because I love my "in-laws" so very much, I now call them my "in-loves".  You should try it...it makes everyone happy!!  

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2005-11-30 10:03 PM


Joyce~
Your thoughts of tender significance reached out and touched my heart~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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cynicsRus
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4 posted 2005-11-30 10:38 PM


Joyce,
I really enjoyed this. And I can empathize with the whole friends and distance message here.
May you continue to enjoy each others company for many holidays to come.

If you must carp: Carpe diem!
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pegasus111
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5 posted 2005-12-01 06:01 AM


this reality touches us all dear friend...well written

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



Trillium
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6 posted 2005-12-01 01:50 PM


Dear Joyce:

A very touching poem! I'm so glad you had a happy Thanksgiving with people you love!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

majnu
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7 posted 2005-12-10 03:30 AM


melancholy, like everything we humans do that is worthwhile. i think tolkien said it best as "sadness without bitterness" which I suppose is closer to being bearable.

but whatever. it was beautiful and touched me.

cheers.

-majnu
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midnightblues
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8 posted 2005-12-10 09:17 AM


Dear Joyce,

Beautiful sentiments skillfully told! I love the poignancy..

Love
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

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