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Tramp Poet
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0 posted 2005-11-29 09:13 PM


hand in hand

the storm rolls on
taking its viciousness
time chasing right behind.
Crashing lighting, then thunder
passes, goes on about its way
leaving behind a new washed day.

Puddles of debris, so dirty
to be avoided, watch out!
stepping 'round stinking residue.
Other puddles of clear water
looked upon with fondness
irrigation, welcomed pondness...

Slowly building, instant crescendo
natural progression, natural result
the storm, she rolls on.
New day of calm, clear promise
welcomed all across the wet land
once again, hand in hand.

~~~~~





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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2005-11-29 10:16 PM


Daniel~
I like the idea of a newly washed day~

Nice to see you gifting us with a new word-treasure~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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2 posted 2005-11-30 10:15 AM


A day, a life, newly washed.  True treasures.  Joyce
BeaSassy
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3 posted 2005-12-01 03:27 AM


The storm has indeed rolled on and I thank God for the new washed day. Love, Bea
Tramp Poet
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4 posted 2005-12-04 09:02 PM


thanks to y'all for replying...
piecing this one together,
it emerged different than originally conceived.    LOL but don't all the lil buggers?
hugz,
daniel

Annie78
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5 posted 2005-12-04 09:14 PM


yes the storm is truly over, and each and every day is now a washed clean day with a fresh new start. Life has indeed become something to look forward to.
God Bless and congratulations
Annie

there is but a short time to exist, love,laugh,live and never stop believing in miracles

midnightblues
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6 posted 2005-12-05 12:22 PM


Oh yay, your powerful words refreshed my mind! I love it =)

Love
MiCheLLe

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