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junemac
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0 posted 2005-11-07 05:53 PM




You lie deep within
neither in my mind
nor my heart
but here,
in my very essence.
You are my caretaker,
my lover, my friend.
the guardian of my soul.
Profound emotions rise
like  a swollen river ready to burst
whenever I feel you.
You waken the excitement in me,
the  tingle of life,
intrigue of uncertainty.
Yet - You are much more --
You are a reminder of pain,
of bitter-sweet ache,
of joy, of love and mortality.
More precious than mere gold,
more beautiful than nature itself
you are the reason,
and my story,
A story that has just begun.

© Copyright 2005 june macfarlane - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-11-07 07:42 PM


What a lovely beginning.  Love, joyce
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2 posted 2005-11-07 09:37 PM


junemac;  This should make someone very happy!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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3 posted 2005-11-08 06:45 PM


this is beautiful. nice work

I want life in every word, to the extent that it's absurd.- The Postal Service

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4 posted 2005-11-13 09:20 AM


Oh, I love this !!
A keeper for my library indeed.
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

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5 posted 2005-11-13 12:11 PM


June~
This is simply WONDERFUL !!!!
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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pictureme2
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6 posted 2005-11-13 11:51 PM


A lovely write....
"in the beginning"
and I am hoping for
"happily ever afters!"


junemac
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7 posted 2005-11-14 06:26 PM


thank you all for your lovely replies.
Hugs from June xxx

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