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pegasus111
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0 posted 2005-09-21 07:20 AM





Through the vacuum of space it came to her
At first a whisper barely audible in the night

It touched her in the darkness, lightly, soothingly
The mood created was warm, tender, desirable

The contact of wave to wave, sense to sense grew
Flourishing in the fertile garden of the mind; ripening

Thoughts undulated and entwined, caressing, exploring
Opening, accepting, surrendering to the beauty unfolding

The whisper grew to an insistent hum, vibrating with promise
Offering the interlocking waves new hope for fulfillment

The energy spiked to near fever pitch in the darkness
Glowing with a radiance of surreal quality

The overload struck with cruel precision, deep into the core
Shattering the oneness into millions of scattered ions

In the deathly silence the whisper faded, only the empty void remaining
Consumed by the vacuum from whence it came, unfinished,
Alone

Destined to wander aimlessly in the nothingness

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2005-09-21 11:56 AM


Peggers~

'Thoughts undulated and entwined, caressing, exploring
Opening, accepting, surrendering to the beauty unfolding'


Oh wow ... 'unfolding' indeed~
I love these pennings from you~
Greatly enjoy seeing you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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2 posted 2005-09-21 01:38 PM


pegasus111:  Now I'm afraid to go to sleep!

Betty Lou

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pegasus111
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3 posted 2005-09-21 06:21 PM


LOL...have no fear Betty Lou..

thanks Marge...

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



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4 posted 2005-09-23 01:01 AM


Wow's so over-used...but...Wow, this one's quite a ride!

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