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Xeonox
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0 posted 2005-09-04 07:10 PM



Among the fictional tales,
Mine almost seem real,
Though many scenes are deleted,
Quite a few are rehearsed over time,
The myths about life are untangled,
With it so are the demons of tomorrow,
And now the show is about to start,
Bang-Boom-shhhhhhhh…
As mysterious as the green cobra,
The interest slithers to capture the attention,
But-
Will the ending fail to keep its place?

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

© Copyright 2005 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2005-09-06 01:48 PM


We'll see, we'll see.  Joyce
junemac
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2 posted 2005-09-10 05:53 AM


Feeling the atmosphere here. Good write.
Hugs June xxx

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