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0 posted 2005-08-24 09:25 PM


Home For One Last Time

Author's notes: I got this idea from tonight I need to eat salad alone all by myself. The theme of this poem is how a relationship can deteriorated without our notices. And sometimes when people go very dry in their life, the only hope for seeing their partner to be home... they might think there is only one way...

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Three second ago, wishing you would call,
Yet one minute ago, I wished you never called.
Picked up the phone as though I kissed your forehead,
To find a few cold salutes and some same old lines.

It doesnt' matter what I have prepared,
For to you, I am just an invisible rose.
Even three second my named on your lips,
Even three second I couldn't have.

Was it my fault that we never communicated much?
When did we got used to strangers in the same bed?
Digging, and crying through pages of memories,
I am blind and cannot seem to figure out where it started?

Was it something you said I did not take to heart?
And now it is haunting my mind in restless sleep.
Was it that I never noticed you did not like Calvin Klein?
Silent language,
When did we start this cold war between us?

I am feeling tired, cold and torn...
Would step in my door once again...
I have many words to say, yet there is no time anymore...
My life is a deep pit without your strong arms...

I am sorry, but I am leaving...
If you care enough, can I see you one last time...

(c)August 24, 2005
Eliza Simmons

Eliza Simmons
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

© Copyright 2005 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
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