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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2005-08-18 03:56 AM


Night Reflection

If I peek through the window,
I shall see a star shining bright,
The road seems to be right,
Yet who knows about the price.
The road seems to be short,
Yet only those who took it know the sour.
Is there anything is free?
Love is sacrifice.
Free love is our Lord.
Long ago He gave us life in Him.
His sacrifice so no one can
Boast about his work.
What am I today?
What did I sacrifice?
What did I offer to life?
Is the world about black and white?
Or this world is a grey hair man?
Many things may tempt us wrong,
Many things may go against our desire,
Back to square one,
Each step rest in our decision.
No one can make us bow,
If our faith is strong as our life.
Only when you can die for love,
That's when we truly love.

(c)Aug 18, 2005
Eliza Simmons

Eliza Simmons
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

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1 posted 2005-08-20 12:15 PM


"No one can make us bow,
If our faith is strong as our life.
Only when you can die for love,
That's when we truly love."

or truly live huh?
bless you...our friend

Joyce Johnson
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2 posted 2005-08-20 09:28 PM


Very nicely done Aries.  love, Joyce
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3 posted 2005-08-21 07:43 PM


Hi Eliza:  I enjoyed your poem.  Nice to see you posting here again.

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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