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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2005-07-30 11:23 PM


Searching in the Sea

Laying down the beach,
under a relaxing yet hopeless sun.
The sun blinded my sight,
I am lost under the bright.

I can hear the sea roaring
As my vein talk back in echo-
My whole body sweats and trembles.
Finally, I see a lighttower,
Looking striaght into my eyes.

Seeking in the dark,
Recall old days where my face was marked.
I would rather be mountains of rock,
Chilling under rain days and nights,
Then standing on a stone,
Alone all by myself.

(c) July 30, 2005
Eliza Simmons

Eliza Simmons
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

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1 posted 2005-08-01 10:41 AM


KBut you're not alone Eliza.  You have us.  Love, Joyce
Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2005-08-08 09:52 AM


Eliza~
This is a melancholy penning~
Glad you have us to share it with !!
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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3 posted 2005-08-13 09:46 PM


Eliza:  You are never really alone.  You have many friends here!

Love
Betty Lou

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aries_luv_ppl
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4 posted 2005-08-15 01:11 PM


hi, thanks for being there for me. This is a poem that describe a drawing I did. In part, I don't know how to overcome my lack of motivation. In part I don't like myself. And in part I wish I have more friends I can hang out with, cuz I stay home all the time. So that's the background info.

Eliza Simmons
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

ctowen
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5 posted 2005-08-15 09:46 PM


... lost under the bright

     indeed between a rock and a hard place,
       but the shade of those who follow your
         steps can help you feel the calming seas.

  
      Felt your words ... CT

A word in hand is worth two in a hush ...  CTOwen/05

              

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