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aries_luv_ppl
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since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2005-07-22 07:33 PM

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Lord, please guard me close,
And take the lead,
For the path is unknown,
Yet is known to You.
Empty night, sobbing tears,
River is whispering of their past.
Ocean deep, evil heaps,
Yet the lasting river
Flows from High Mount to where You are.

Lord, please guard me close,
And take the lead,
For the path is unknown,
Yet is known to You.

In You, much miracles come true-
Your Hands... are full of intangible grace,
Yet Your love... is given so freely,
That each of us is breathing to this moment.

(c)May 23, 2005
Eliza Simmons

Eliza Simmons
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

LoveBug

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Member Elite

since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

1 posted 2005-07-22 08:38 PM

"Empty night, sobbing tears,
River is whispering of their past.
Ocean deep, evil heaps,
Yet the lasting river
Flows from High Mount to where You are."

Wow.. this piece touched me so much. The beauty in which you describe how even pain can lead to the Creator is breathtaking!

Love's a lovely lad
His bringing up is beauty
Who loves him not is mad
For I must pay him duty
-Anonymous

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

2 posted 2005-07-23 11:01 AM

I like your comparison of God's love to that of a lasting river. Well done. Love, Joyce

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

3 posted 2005-07-24 09:49 AM

This is a very nice poem.

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

jjote
Senior Member

since 2002-12-25

Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2005-07-24 06:30 PM

LIfe is a miracle, this piece reminds us of it. Pain is part of it, but with Him to walk our way, we should have no fear.

lovely.

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

5 posted 2005-07-25 12:03 PM

Dear Eliza: Very good poem and wonderfully inspirational!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

Annie78
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 469
here then there then back here

6 posted 2005-07-25 01:47 PM

touching and full of agape...
thanks ALP
lol oops this was TrampPoet
used Annie's profile by mistake...my bad

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