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Joyce Johnson
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0 posted 2005-07-02 03:54 PM


Empty Nest
(To the tune of: "I was born about ten thousand years ago."

I've seen chickens try to hatch a big glass ball.
Why the farmer put it there, I can't recall.
But the saddest bird I've known, is this robin all alone
Who's been sitting on her nest from spring to fall.

The swallows have raised several families.
They are flying back and forth with perfect ease.
Madam Robin pays no mind and every day I find
She's still sitting on that nest without a cease.

I will never know what happened to her mate.
I truly fear he's met a dreadful fate;
Nor what has happened to her little eggs of blue.
By now they'd be no good at any rate.

She made her nest in my nice potted plant.
As comfortable a bed you'd ever want.
That is if you were a bird, but there has not been heard
A single baby peeping and I can't

Bear the picture that she makes there all alone,
The saddest bird that I have ever known.
My plant is dying too, without water wouldn't you?
If they'd lived her children now would be full grown.

So now you see the problem that I've got.*
Should I leave the nest right there or should I not?
Which is the kinder way, tear it down or let it stay?
Until that bird and I are both besot.

Perhaps she is just working through her grief
And that little nest is giving her relief.
So I'll just let her stay until she flies away
And my pretty plant is down to its last leaf.

Next spring I hope she finds a brand new mate,
And he'll be the kind to help her sit and wait
For the little babes to hatch, and her tenderness he'll match.
May she have some fertile eggs to incubate.

By: Joyce 07/02/05

* I know its bad grammar, but I needed a rhyme.

[This message has been edited by Joyce Johnson (07-02-2005 06:28 PM).]

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Isobel
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Qld, Australia
1 posted 2005-07-03 04:42 AM


Dear Joyce

I really liked this poem of yours.  It actually reminded me of this song I heard my mother sing once when I was a child:


Lonely Robin

There's a lonely little Robin in the tree by my door
And he waits for his mate to return evermore
So remember, please remember that I'm always blue
Like a lonely little Robin I'm waiting for you

When you went away dear you promised that you'd write
And I thought that you would be true
But now the mailbox is empty day and night
As empty as the arms that held you


Those are the only two verses I know.

Love Isobel xo



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2 posted 2005-07-05 06:51 PM


Joyce~
It is a sad little nest of affairs~

I have a little Love Bird (Tricky Vicky) that has no mate ... she lays her little eggs ... sits them ... until I remove them ... then lays more ... sits them ... until I remove them~

Once I had a batchelorette Cockatiel that laid 27 eggs .... EVERY SPRING ... nah ... they don't make a very big omelette~

(I didn't EVEN try it ... honest Injun !)

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Juju
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In your dreams
3 posted 2005-07-05 10:55 PM


wow sad.

-Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

pegasus111
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4 posted 2005-07-06 08:41 AM


all good things come to those who sit and wait

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



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5 posted 2005-07-06 09:36 PM


Dear Joyce:  You do have a problem I can see! Hopefully the robin won't sit there much longer! It's hard to know what to do isn't it?

Love
Betty Lou

iliana
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6 posted 2005-07-15 12:43 PM


Joyce, how very well I understand that Robin.  Good write.   .....jo
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