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A Lack Of Words (A Tanka)

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2005-07-01 09:57 PM

A Lack Of Words

I sit down to write
A beautiful poem for you
But the words don't come
Loneliness is all around
I am feeling mostly down

7-1-05

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2005-07-01 10:01 PM

Ah Sue, I'm sorry you're feeling down.
But, it is so good to see you posting...
I miss you here.
~Heart hugs coming your way, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

2 posted 2005-07-01 10:10 PM

Hope tomorrow is a better day! Enjoyed your post!

Trillium

Betty Lou Hebert

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2005-07-01 10:21 PM

I like this
and can relate to how you feel

hugs
and chin up

tomorrow is another day

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2005-07-01 10:26 PM

SweetSuzieQ~

Well ... I think it's downright puuurrrtttyyy~
Soooo ... see, you've done a lovely Tanka
that expresses so much~

Wishing you were here ... we'd go fishing !!
I'll bet that would cheer us BOTH up !!

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

5 posted 2005-07-01 10:39 PM

Thank you all for reading and replying.

LoveBug

Moderator

Member Elite

since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

6 posted 2005-07-01 11:09 PM

A good poem, for having such a lack of words

I think you said just enough. If you need more, it will come later, I promise

Enjoyed!

Love's a lovely lad
His bringing up is beauty
Who loves him not is mad
For I must pay him duty
-Anonymous

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

7 posted 2005-07-02 02:06 AM

A lot said in a few words. Love, Joyce

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