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Juju
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In your dreams

0 posted 2005-05-08 03:21 PM



I saw a man
His face was the desert he hated
And eyes blind from scrap metal
All he was doing was taking a smoke
and that was serenity
His gaze was off in the distance

Even though it wethered his body
he exposed his face to the sun

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

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Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
1 posted 2005-07-05 06:53 PM



Our apologies for letting this one sit here so long without a peep~

I like what you do with words~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Juju
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In your dreams
2 posted 2005-07-05 08:28 PM


Oh thank you.  I did feal a little bad, but on the other hand I know I have fans from school that aren't regestered that read my stuff.  So I know someone always reads it.
I fealt bad about the man in the moon one to. I liked that one...

-Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

Joyce Johnson
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3 posted 2005-07-05 11:47 PM


I don't know where this was hiding.  Sad little story.  Joyce
Juju
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4 posted 2005-07-06 08:19 PM


oh thank you

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

Isobel
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5 posted 2005-07-10 05:00 AM


An expression on one's face needs no words!  You can see and feel their pain!

Love Isobel


Juju
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In your dreams
6 posted 2005-07-10 11:40 AM


Thank you!

-Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

jjote
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Ontario, Canada
7 posted 2005-07-27 05:11 AM


All he was doing was taking a smoke
and that was serenity
His gaze was off in the distance


Now this is a picture of serenity.
in so few words, they tell much more.

junemac
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since 2003-04-24
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8 posted 2005-07-27 05:21 PM


Deep and thoughtful words which cojur up this man and his quiet ways. Very nicely penned.
Hugs June xxxxxxx

Juju
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9 posted 2005-08-03 10:21 PM


Oh wow thank you ! much appreciated!


-Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

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