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Tramp Poet
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since 2000-01-06
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Could Be Anywhere...

0 posted 2005-05-04 03:37 AM


the Lovers

she whispers sweet love
as he gently touches her
darkling gift of kiss
swirling spinning in the mist
they slumber dreaming in love


~~~~~~~

thought i would jump on the tanka bandwagon...
with a little help from my friends!




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Annie78
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since 2003-10-03
Posts 469
here then there then back here
1 posted 2005-05-04 03:39 AM


great tanka tramp

there is but a short time to exist, love,laugh,live and never stop believing in miracles

Joyce Johnson
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Member Rara Avis
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2 posted 2005-05-04 02:21 PM


Proof that it doesn't take many words to say a lot.  joyce
pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
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ocala, fl, usa
3 posted 2005-05-04 06:56 PM


we seem to be getting in the spirit...

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
4 posted 2005-05-07 07:09 PM


well done!
BeaSassy
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since 2005-10-13
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California
5 posted 2005-10-20 08:21 PM


Thank you for the birthday present.
Annie78
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here then there then back here
6 posted 2005-11-06 10:58 PM


this was one of a couple that tramp and i wrote together at a time when love was bright
and shiny. too bad it didn't work out
Annie

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