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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Sorrowed Remnants ~*Marge Tindal*~ Silhouetted shade Casting out remnants of love Fluffed off in the show Of other loves of the night Shadows cascade in sorrow~ ~Because I know how you dear people worry about me ... rest assured that this is just a Tanka form piece I did for Aleta's website as a Tanka example~ http://www.1-2-free-forums.com/mf/tara-about37.html Tee-Hee-Hee ... dang, can you believe it's Just A Poem ?  I LOVE YOU ALL~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: I am really glad it is "just a poem!" Well done! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Annie78 Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 469here then there then back here |
Me too!!! Annie there is but a short time to exist, love,laugh,live and never stop believing in miracles |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thanks, gals ... how's about a Tanka or two from YOU ??? *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Annie78 Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 469here then there then back here |
would be most willing to try, but have never done this form of poetry so don't really know what a tanka is. explain to me and then maybe i will be able to give it a try Annie there is but a short time to exist, love,laugh,live and never stop believing in miracles |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetAnnie~ Glad to oblige - Now ... the TANKA ... ahhhh, it can go on and on foreverly~ Line 1 - five syllables Line 2 - seven syllables Line 3 - five syllables Line 4 - seven syllables Line 5 - seven syllables It's an easy one to do by the syllable count ... but can be challenging as well to keep a theme going~ ***And THEN ... you can continue it into an even longer story line breaking it into Tanka after Tanka after Tanka~ Please email me at noles1@totcon.com if you post one~  Would LOVE to see you give it a try dear lady~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Dear Marge. Your Tanka is lovely. I have been gone for a few days and will try this form when I get rested up from my travels. Love, Joyce |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
dear Marge, Tanka very much for the lesson dear lady. |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
Dear Marge, Tanka for the lesson dear lady. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very good piece well done |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
Marge I like the way this is done |
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