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The Dark Beyond |
Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
The Dark Beyond On our boat, I love to sleep. Floating safe above the deep. Anchored in some quiet bay, After sailing through the day. Often in the night, I lie, Hearing splashing sounds nearby. In the dark beyond, I sense Something moving and immense! To the deck I'll sometimes go. Try to see what swims below. But the darkness hides from view All the creatures passing through. Swing of mast and tidal sway, Drive uneasiness away. Breezes blowing from the land, Tell me daybreak is at hand, So I stay, to see the light Slay the mystery of the night! Betty Lou Hebert Published by Poetry Unlimited, 1993 Dana Literary Society, 2004 |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BettyLou~ My friend ... this one took me to the water~ Floating on the word beauty of you~ Ah ... how I long to go boating~ I've always loved the water ... and miss my time of silence in tow~ *Huglets* to you my lady fair~ A long overdue to my Ronnie~ I love you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
I really like this one dear. I can feel the sway of the boat under my feet, taste the salt in the air. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: Memories of Puget Sound here and sailing to the San Juan Islands. It's been a long time now, since we have sailed anywhere! Hope you can get out on the water soon and enjoy! Ronnie sends love back! Thanks, Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
pegasus111: Thanks for reading. Sailing used to be a big part of my life. I miss it! Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Annie78 Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 469here then there then back here |
i just love the way you describe things..i'm not one for the water so much, but think i should probably learn to give it a chance in the near future Annie there is but a short time to exist, love,laugh,live and never stop believing in miracles |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Annie: Thanks for reading. I was nervous about the water when we first started sailing but I soon grew to like it! Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful write! |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
passing shadows: Thanks for your nice comment! Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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