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PassionatelyRomantic
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0 posted 2005-02-15 11:10 PM



Love lost in lustful desires
Flows sweetly in darkened haste
I know not what love requires
except a heart… and a taste.

Darkness comes and yet this love lives
Hidden ‘neath this outward view
Yet in silence this love still gives
Unto itself… wholly to you.

Love whispers faintly to be heard
through soft spoken words it is love
Dimmed by time and lustily lured
Shines itself still, in light above.

Let thy love be known to those ears
Though it appears love is less shown
It has lived through silenced years
yet forevermore will thy love be known!

© Copyright 2005 Jared Lee Dudgeon - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-02-16 02:18 AM


This flows smoothly.  Joyce
TexUS
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since 2003-03-20
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2 posted 2005-02-22 12:26 PM


Darkly Passionate!

Great read, thanks

passing shadows
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3 posted 2005-02-22 11:10 AM


love the style
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