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PassionatelyRomantic
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since 2004-01-24

Posts 190

0 posted 2004-12-13 07:38 PM

Love, hath I forgotten since thee disappeared?
That look… that touch… forgotten I have not-
for all before that date, by law hath adhered-
to laws of perfection, yet love had not.

What can be said of love that doth not offend?
For none doth compare to that of being loved,
yet for love, and beauty, these words, I must send,
in hopes these words, of thy love for thee proved.

So great is thy love these words I must proclaim
for thy love lives upon my beating breast,
and beneath it, love’s passions are in flame-
for not even death could put this heart at rest.

Celestial sins amongst thy lover’s eyes,
brings forth magical realms so they are near,
for I know none above in star lightened skies,
could justify the passion I hold dear.

What precious jewel or metal does not disgrace?
For they fail in duty to represent,
the brilliance, the beauty, upon thy face,
only love to thy beauty may ascent.

What comes from thy virgin lips of devotion?
But pure ecstasy, beauty, love… exposed,
exposed to love’s flawless hymn of emotion-
a piece, only two lovers could have composed.

Love, have I forgotten thee? Nay I know thee,
for love lost has revived this heart of mine,
and that is why love, listen to this plea
I pray someday love may again be thine!

[This message has been edited by PassionatelyRomantic (12-14-2004 01:59 PM).]

Lighthousebob
Member Elite

since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

1 posted 2004-12-14 05:59 PM

I think that you've successfully named yourself my poet friend. This poem is definitely Passionately Romantic. (Smiles) Sometimes separation does certainly cause the heart to grow fonder. Very well written and well expressed are your thoughts and your love here. -Bob

jjote
Senior Member

since 2002-12-25

Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2005-01-29 10:44 PM

"So great is thy love these words I must proclaim
for thy love lives upon my beating breast,
and beneath it, love’s passions are in flame-
for not even death could put this heart at rest."

I like this stanza best.
2 hearts beating as one - the essence of love I think. Which in a world full of cynics, rarely does one find.

*Sigh* I need to look at my own "love" life, sometimes, like jewelry, one needs to polish it for the glitter to shine bright once more and again.

"Love"-ly poem.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2005-02-02 11:52 AM

a beautiful write

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

4 posted 2005-02-02 02:35 PM

Love expressed this way is lovely indeed. Joyce

Annie78
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 469
here then there then back here

5 posted 2005-03-17 11:16 PM

i looked at love again and found my friend.
Annie

there is but a short time to exist, love,laugh,live and never stop believing in miracles

pegasus111
Member Elite

since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

6 posted 2005-03-18 07:13 AM

this piece is first rate.

Thy words are as chimes that awaken secret longings for first love.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

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