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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA 
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Have you ever had a feeling So natural, so pure That it’s no use concealing Because you are so sure It’s what is right, it’s what is good An unquestionable truth That spans a lifetime, as it could Be felt from old age back to youth Have you ever had a feeling That could soften up your heart Or tear it down and, reeling Quickly rip your world apart? Because it is so deep inside It’s coming from your very core For in your heart and soul reside That which lasts forevermore Have you ever had a feeling That no logic can explain Yet makes itself revealing In your happiness and pain? From times when you’re ecstatic Or down in misery A feeling so sporadic As the wandering winds may be Have you ever had a feeling So powerful, so great That you can’t be stopped by anything And you facilitate Abilities you didn’t know You had until the time you knew The feeling, that which made you grow Taller than what’s blocking you Have you ever had a feeling With the softness of a cloud That lifts you through the ceiling And can make you sing out loud? It brings that look upon your face That melts the hearts of others And can bring the dearest true embrace From strangers, sisters, brothers… Have you ever had a feeling That is widely known as ‘love’ Felt between all beings And in Heaven up above Have you ever had a feeling So innocent, so true Because I have, I’m now revealing It’s what I feel for you…. …Lavender! "Staying true to yourself and your ideals in spite of a world that says you shouldn't even EXIST... That's what I think it means to be a dragon." -KF [This message has been edited by Little_Spyro (12-01-2004 03:30 AM).] |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
I love it!  Yes...I have... Lizzie. "Time has told me not to ask for more, one day our ocean will find its shore" ~Nick Drake |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Yes I've had that wonderful childlike feeling. You describe it beautifully. Joyce |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Yes, I've been lucky enough to have that same feeling! Good poem! Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
WOW!!! What a feeling!!! Of course, I did not know what feeling you were writing about until I got to about the end of your poem and then, WOW, I thought that describes if perfectly. Good job. -Bob |
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Annie78 Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 469here then there then back here |
boy oh boy how you have described the way it makes you feel...even when the one that gives it to you is gone and the feeling lingers on. oh yes i know the feeling well Annie |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Oh yes! yes I had too! I LOVE LAVENDER  Thanks for sharing, this is wonderful, and its definitely one of the bestest poems I've read this week! Love MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Your feeling reveal, a heart that is real. Enjoyed, Melton |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome write! |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Way to go Spyro!! You're poems are always a pleasure to read, and yes I have had that feeling  Thank you for bringing it to life with words |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
OMG!! Where have you been my little dragon friend!! Vicky told me you had posted this! I'm so grateful for her telling me cause this is awesome!! --as usual Gave me chills just to read you again....Be well my friend  hugs, g "Everybody just wants to get high...sit and watch a perfect world go by..." (T.McGraw) |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Little_Spyro, This is one amazing poem. Simplicity leading into a deeper feeling of warmth felt for Lavender. I've sure missed you and am so glad you have posted again and are happy. Dawn |
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LadyDracaWolf Member
since 2002-09-19
Posts 73CA |
Very good little dragon. I think somewhere, a little girl is smiling. |
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Beasley Senior Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 682Cheboygan,MI USA |
This is really a great poem! It was wonderful to read. Barb |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh, this is wonderful. Bravo !! hugs, Chris "Nunc scio quit sit amor." |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
I really liked this!!!! Oh by the way......I love/addicted to the game Spyro. |
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