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Tramp Poet
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0 posted 2004-09-26 05:12 PM


Tis Just Another Day!

Broken promises
evil words tendered
spears of hate inbedded.
Running away from
stealing of refuge
making love to friends.

tis just another day!

Vows meant forever
cold, still, betrayed
once again; next, please.
Dancing with brother
reading sweet lies
once believed selfishly.

tis just another day!

Succubi, so it seems
my son does swear
the flies went away!
Hole pulled in on top
dank, powerfull, sweet
the earth swallowed...

tis just another day!

Feeling ok, today
knowing now, the lies
betrayed, then set free!
Tomorrow is gleaming
bekons with promise
darkness, evil is gone!

tis just another day!

Warning to those
who hear the siren
it’s sweet, but evil.
Speaking true love
same song, many others
sadly, you will be next.

beware...
tis just another day!

~~~~~~~



© Copyright 2004 Daniel James Burt - All Rights Reserved
Tramp Poet
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1 posted 2004-10-27 04:42 PM


BWA...
lol probably the best illustration of where
the truncated offering later was coming from...
daniel

Annie78
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2 posted 2004-11-12 07:00 PM


yes, this was something that i did and not with pleasure or glory but with shame and guilt.
your bride

Broken_Winged_Angel
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3 posted 2004-11-15 08:50 AM


Tramp Poet ~ It sounds as though your hearts hurting badly.  *hugs* I'm here for you if you need someone to vent at.  Then again, you've got a poets soul so writing might be the best therapy.  

Annie ~ The choices in life can either make or break us...I'm guessing as to what happened...as I wasn't there, and am not a part of either one of your lifes on a daily basis that's about all I can do..is tentatively guess.

Both of you ~ What you once had was very beautiful and strong...and left many of us here weeping with something akin to jealousy and happiness for you mixed.  I'm sorry to see that .... it's fallen apart? I can't do much more then sit and hurt for you both.

Beautiful, yet aching poem Tramp. I've been on both sides of that boat.

Your time is here.  Take one last look at it, then never come back.  This part of your life is already over...

Annie78
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4 posted 2004-12-11 10:06 PM


My Most Loved Tramp,

You know the truth, have been told the truth, and still you cannot let me love you, the flies went away...it is the middle of winter darling, and believe me when the "prophet" speaks of evil it is not of me she is talking about...still yet...my prayers will always be with you and one day maybe you will see that God not the new woman speaks the truth and to your heart.
Annie

passing shadows
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5 posted 2004-12-12 04:29 AM



Annie78
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6 posted 2004-12-13 05:17 PM


unfortunately for you my tramp the evil is surrounding you more strongly that you could ever deem possible....tis i who escaped. you wanted a cease and desist...can you accept cease, desist, and unexist? live with it now, and pray for your own soul. the succubi was never i.
Annie

Annie78
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7 posted 2006-01-10 12:37 PM


and what do you call this

i am but a simple poet, you can hurt me, but you can't stop the ink flow

Ron
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8 posted 2006-01-10 01:29 AM


quote:
and what do you call this

Sadly, I would have to call it the last cryptic dig you get to make in these forums.

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