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Never Expressed |
paraboxer Member
since 2002-11-10
Posts 121Maryland, USA |
Never Expressed (The muse tis the same. She was a friend that I never got to tell I felt deeper feelings, and still feel, for. She loves another man now.) ~ ~ ~ ~ Love for you, never expressed. Weeks and months, deeply depressed. I desire to speak to you, but I do fear. Even worse news, without peer. I fear you'll announce engagement to this man. It will burn through my heart like a red hot brand. I can resent your lover, but I feel base. As though the Sistine Chapel I did deface. I hope time will find you in my arms. But for now, for him, belong your charms. My love for you remains known yet unsaid. I write these poems to clear my head. I don't know, should I tell you? Will this mean our friendship is through? |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
this is beautiful.. as always it is for her.... the only advice i can say is let your heart lead you on what you tell her. let your heart lead and force your head to follow....... she might have some idea that you like her (its a female thing) and might not be sure about it, you will never know because you never tried. dont regret not taking this chance for the rest of your life always remember 'you will never recieve anything if you never ask for it' and to remember you friendship, that can be worth more than anything to people wjo know what they have infront of them. if you ever want any advice my email is hells_aangel_128@hotmail.com you welcome to email me, especially on matters of the heart.... live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever...... |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
aww so sad and so beautiful It is an all too familiar story. Love and luck Hugs June xxxxx |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
This was soo.. beautifully written, and i coud feel every word. Amazing write. I efel the same way about a freind of myne, but it is sort of different. anyways, amazing write, as i said before. Karissa I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Wow...I can relate...you have to tell her before it's too late, or else you will be wondering forever what could have been or what would have happened. ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I can understand this well |
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PatAngel Member
since 2004-04-05
Posts 451California |
So very sad, yet beautiful in it's own way. I sure can relate to this also. Thank you for sharing. Patricia 'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go. |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Allies got it right. If you don't tell her you'll never know how she feels in return. Very beautifully written. BWA Your time is here. Take one last look at it, then never come back. This part of your life is already over... |
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