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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
you think your doing the right thing but your not tou dont realise how much pain your putting me through youve ripped my heart youve torn my soul youve done the thing you said you would not do you have broken my heart you have shredded it into millions of pieces you broke your promise and made me cry you were my everything you were the reason i was breathing now my oxygen has been taken from me how am i to live how am i to continue what will i do i dont want any other i just wawnt you why cant you realise i dont care if you have a car or not i dont care if your flat broke i dont care where you are living the only thing i care about is you and you alone you are my light and that has been stolen from me you were my life and that seems dull and boring with out you around tonight your killing me with your words your killing me by trying to do the 'right' thing you are so scared of your feelings you would think im going to dump you at the slightest thing wrong im not like that im not like your last girl this is a vent about my now ex b/f who dumped me today because he doesnt have a car any more, and cant get out to see me any more..... sorry this is not really very good... i just needed a vent for these emotions that have being building up inside me all day live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever...... |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
at; a truly passionate and poignant write! i can relate! my wife moved out because she was convinced it "was the right thing" and it "was so i could be happy" etc etc... eventually she realized she was just being selfish and that love was what was really important; not self-centered excuses for one's own behavior. thank you for the vent... it provoked and cried out tramp |
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PatAngel Member
since 2004-04-05
Posts 451California |
AussieTeen, Your poem expressed much emotion. I could feel the anguish in your words. It was a very good write. Love, Patricia 'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go. |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
aww such a sad one. Very emotional. Nicely written. Hugs June x |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
thank you all for your kind replies... you are too kind.... this is no where near my usual standards i set for my self.... and i wrote it in about five minutes.... thankyou all again live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever...... |
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