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junemac
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0 posted 2004-08-02 04:29 PM



Circles grey and white
upon a white washed sky
watch him chase freedom
watch him swoop and fly.
Understated beauty,
gentle bird up high.
Come perch upon my fingers,
feed from off my palm.
Let me feel the quick beat,
the tiny heart in your breast.
and tell me the way to freedom,
So my soul can be free to rest.

© Copyright 2004 june macfarlane - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-08-02 08:01 PM


very pretty picture in words.  Love, Joyce
PatAngel
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2 posted 2004-08-03 12:16 PM


Great poem June! I loved the ending.

Hugs,
Patricia

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For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

Beasley
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3 posted 2004-08-03 01:15 PM


This is really a lovely poem, June.
Barb

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4 posted 2004-08-05 08:56 PM


Junemac:  Enjoyed reading this.  We have mourning doves in the fields near us and I love to hear them coo.

Love
Betty Lou

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5 posted 2004-08-06 11:31 AM


I do love that ending there
junemac
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6 posted 2004-08-07 06:46 PM


thank you my dear friends. I enjoyed writing this one very much.glad you enjoyed reading it too.
Hugs june x

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