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Voice from the Twilight |
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Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
I can here him whisper to me so faintly in the night Though his face i cannot see but the memory's are bright Who he is i do not know but he feels to be a friend The message that he speaks i find hard to comprehend Sometimes his words i think i know In my dreams so far away Quickly taking flight with the coming of the day Oh how i try to bring them back for his urgency i do sense But they are so lost to me My mind's in self defence How can i except these things i hear Answers to questions i seek What is he trying to tell me Is it a warning, a response or a trick And what if all was understood this voice from the twilight zone Maybe answers isn't what i need Oh why can't he leave me alone |
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Trillium 
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sometimes dreams are so vivid they stay with us for days afterwards. Almost like being haunted! I've had this happen to me too. Really enjoyed your poem. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I don't know what you're hearing here, but this is a nice poem. Welcome to this corner. Joyce |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Voices from the twillight - wishful thinking or reality? How hard it is to distinguish one from the other sometimes. Great write Suzanne and good to see you again.  |
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Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
Thank you so much for your responses,and yes it is good to be back. First poem i have written in awhile and it sure felt good.Sorry it was a confusing one but dreams are confusing. Suzanne |
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leafseranade Member
since 2001-07-06
Posts 118Wisconsin, USA |
dreams sure are confusing. Enjoyed this a lot and I can relate. Sometimes you just want someone out of your head! |
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Inanothertime Member
since 2001-06-29
Posts 72 |
this is quite interesting, and I get a visual that's also quite interesting--thanks, and welcome back. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Suzanne~ These are lovely feelings you've expressed. 'but he feels to be a friend' I sure like that thought~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Haunted by someone who is no one but in a dream. This was a great piece. Liked it!!! Bridgette |
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