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Parting Thoughts

pegasus111
Member Elite

since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

0 posted 2001-09-06 08:07 AM

I would give up everything I own,
to spend one more day with you alone

to see you smile at me that way,
and fall into those eyes of grey

and hold your hand in mine at night,
as moonbeams dance in pale delight

walk slowly on those sunlit shores,
and plan those silly little chores

touch your face, your hair, your skin,
and feel your soul so deep within

this need, this ache that gnaws at me,
would dissipate if I could see,

the future and all it’s mystery,
that someday you would be with me

so just one more time before I go,
to that final place we all know

I bless you my sweet lady fair,
for all you gave, for being there,

in those last hours, a precious few,
my arms in darkness holding you,

the love you gave so tenderly,
to such an ordinary guy like me

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

2dalimit
Member Elite

since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

1 posted 2001-09-06 08:19 AM

This is so tender. There is a lot of lasting love in these verses. I hope all is well.

Melton

bestgirl911
Senior Member

since 2000-10-04

Posts 551
Clio, MI , United We Stand

2 posted 2001-09-06 10:32 PM

Pegasus...

This just touched my heart...how sweet and gentle this is......

Ranea

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

3 posted 2001-09-06 11:56 PM

It is easy to see that these feelings come from the soul. Good luck to you. Joyce

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

4 posted 2001-09-07 12:42 PM

A sad poem with much longing in it, but beautifully written. I hope better days are ahead for you.

Betty Lou Hebert

leafseranade
Member

since 2001-07-06

Posts 118
Wisconsin, USA

5 posted 2001-09-09 01:48 PM

very sweet sentiments.

Inanothertime
Member

since 2001-06-29

Posts 72

6 posted 2001-09-10 02:46 AM

this is so beautiful! It's a good thing that love never dies. Thanks for these lovely words, so heartfelt.

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