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PKreturns
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0 posted 2004-07-19 01:18 PM


She seemed so bright amidst the dark
That the stars burned with envy
The sky opened up to swallow her whole
And the clouds fell to the sea
I was pretending that the sun still shone
And illuminated the bluest of skies
Until one day I looked up unawares
And beheld those same knowing eyes
Transfixed, she held me for a time
That seemed to last forever
With the sweetest of smiles,
Her eyes seemed to say, "Never"


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Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2004-07-19 01:30 PM


Perhaps you read her wrong.  Let's hope so.  Joyce
PKreturns
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2 posted 2004-07-19 05:05 PM


I wish it were so Joyce...thank you very much.
PatAngel
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3 posted 2004-07-20 02:25 AM


PK~

Very well written!

Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

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4 posted 2004-07-20 08:44 AM


PK~
This read sooooooooo beautifully uplifting ...
then the closing line plummeted my spirits~
I can well imagine that it did yours also~

I am putting this graphic here for you ...
as I was instantly reminded of it as I read this~



*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

PKreturns
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5 posted 2004-07-20 12:47 PM


Wow. Thanks Marge....that is perfect.
I am humbled you did that.

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6 posted 2004-07-20 12:56 PM


hearthugs to you
junemac
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7 posted 2004-07-20 04:14 PM


Another beautiful amazing poem.
Hugs from June x

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