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Corner Pub #2

In her eyes

PKreturns
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since 2003-07-21

Posts 362
New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2004-07-19 01:18 PM

She seemed so bright amidst the dark
That the stars burned with envy
The sky opened up to swallow her whole
And the clouds fell to the sea
I was pretending that the sun still shone
And illuminated the bluest of skies
Until one day I looked up unawares
And beheld those same knowing eyes
Transfixed, she held me for a time
That seemed to last forever
With the sweetest of smiles,
Her eyes seemed to say, "Never"

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2004-07-19 01:30 PM

Perhaps you read her wrong. Let's hope so. Joyce

PKreturns
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since 2003-07-21

Posts 362
New Orleans, LA

2 posted 2004-07-19 05:05 PM

I wish it were so Joyce...thank you very much.

PatAngel
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since 2004-04-05

Posts 451
California

3 posted 2004-07-20 02:25 AM

PK~

Very well written!

Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2004-07-20 08:44 AM

PK~
This read sooooooooo beautifully uplifting ...
then the closing line plummeted my spirits~
I can well imagine that it did yours also~

I am putting this graphic here for you ...
as I was instantly reminded of it as I read this~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

PKreturns
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since 2003-07-21

Posts 362
New Orleans, LA

5 posted 2004-07-20 12:47 PM

Wow. Thanks Marge....that is perfect.
I am humbled you did that.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

6 posted 2004-07-20 12:56 PM

hearthugs to you

junemac
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since 2003-04-24

Posts 1005
uk

7 posted 2004-07-20 04:14 PM

Another beautiful amazing poem.
Hugs from June x

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