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PatAngel
Member

since 2004-04-05

Posts 451
California

0 posted 2004-07-18 02:49 AM

Radiant cascading colors, always changing,
as the luminous sun reflects against a waterfall.
A tear falls one moment, then a smile
crosses my face, as memories pieced together
form a patchwork of dreams while I sleep.

At times I am running in slow-motion,
only to find I haven't moved at all.
A soft gentle embrace, yet no face I can see,
sensing this person holds my heart,
leaving me breathless and filled with glee.

Hidden deep within the confines of my mind
lurking in shadows, a shrouded phantom.
Afraid one moment until the scene changes,
then delighted by faeries whose magical tune,
forms a patchwork of dreams while I sleep.

[This message has been edited by PatAngel (07-18-2004 11:29 AM).]

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-07-18 03:59 AM

good write

I understand the swinging back and forth, the dreams, the comfort and fear, the prisms

junemac
Senior Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 1005
uk

2 posted 2004-07-18 05:05 AM

Pat this is a beautiful, emotive poem. I enjoyed your lovely imagery here too.
Hugs June x

Beasley
Senior Member

since 2003-11-28

Posts 682
Cheboygan,MI USA

3 posted 2004-07-18 06:45 AM

I love the way you string your words and thoughts together in this writing. Great poem.
Love, Barb

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

4 posted 2004-07-18 10:18 AM

Your words capture your nebulous dream. Love Joyce

PatAngel
Member

since 2004-04-05

Posts 451
California

5 posted 2004-07-18 12:37 PM

Thank you June, Barb, and Joyce for your lovely responses.

Love,
Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2004-07-18 04:24 PM

Pat~

'delighted by faeries whose magical tune,
forms a patchwork of dreams while I sleep'

Oh yes ... oh yes ... the magic of the Faerie-keep~

Beautiful my friend~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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PatAngel
Member

since 2004-04-05

Posts 451
California

7 posted 2004-07-18 11:31 PM

Thank you Marge! "Patchwork of Dreams" came to me last night as I lay contemplating the different scenes which take place during sleep.

Love,
Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

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