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peaceful_dreamer
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since 2003-04-25
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0 posted 2004-07-17 01:57 AM


Across the ocean, somewhere in paradise,
There exists such a place,
Where your happiness is heaven laying on a beach, and
The stars in your eyes glow on your face.
The sand so soft like silk between your toes,
The oceans breeze so gentle and warm.
The colors so vivid, alive in your eyes,
Every one is roasting lazily in the sun, and
The birds are soaring overhead.
The waters so clear you can see to the bottom,
So alive you can feel it's heartbeat,
It's thunder, you can feel the excitement.
You stand in awe hearing your heart in your ears.
The sun begins to set leaving behind a treasure meant
For paradise, and you are standing hand in hand
With you life, hope, heart, your man.
Across the ocean, somewhere in reality,
There exists such a place,
Where you can't remember when you left,
And when you'll be back again.

"I'm just me, trapped in a body."

-peaceful_dreamer

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PatAngel
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since 2004-04-05
Posts 451
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1 posted 2004-07-17 11:55 AM


Peaceful_Dreamer,

Breathtaking imagery! This is very good!

Love,
Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

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