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Obsession

peaceful_dreamer
Member

since 2003-04-25

Posts 159
SoMeWhErE oVeR tHe RaInBoW

0 posted 2004-07-17 01:55 AM

I can see you smile even though it's hidden inside.
I can see your heart beat.
The thunder is silent; the rain has been gentle,
But you -
    You are alive.

I can see your eyes, the windows to your soul.
I can see your mind.
The lightening is dark; the clouds are gone,
But you -
    You are alive.

I can see the love you have, the love you want,
I can see your reflection.
The world is at a standstill,
But you -
    You are alive.

"I'm just me, trapped in a body."

-peaceful_dreamer

PatAngel
Member

since 2004-04-05

Posts 451
California

1 posted 2004-07-17 04:33 AM

Peaceful_Dreamer,

What a beautiful read!

Love,
Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2004-07-17 08:33 AM

"I can see you smile even though it's hidden inside.
I can see your heart beat.
The thunder is silent; the rain has been gentle,
But you -
You are alive."

I loved this part, maybe due to the rain and thunder you have in there.....but it's great!

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