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PatAngel
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since 2004-04-05

Posts 451
California

0 posted 2004-07-12 08:18 PM

Mists of Gray

Through mists of gray
came gentle arms enfolding,
as long-held tears drift away.
The heart cannot forget
the tender sweetness of your smile,
the touch upon my lips
which for a moment whirled
within my breast.

In silence I weep,
for our meeting too swift,
leaving many things unsaid.
Was it only a dream?
Can two hearts love
from distant shores,
sharing a bond so profound?
This friendship like tall pines,
growing slowly
till it soars to the heavens.

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

peaceful_dreamer
Member

since 2003-04-25

Posts 159
SoMeWhErE oVeR tHe RaInBoW

1 posted 2004-07-13 01:39 AM

This is so beautiful. You have a wonderful talent. I hope to read more of you work soon!
-Peaceful

"I'm just me, trapped in a body."

-peaceful_dreamer

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-07-13 04:34 AM

sadly beautiful

PKreturns
Member

since 2003-07-21

Posts 362
New Orleans, LA

3 posted 2004-07-13 08:50 AM

Friendship like tall pines...I like that.
Can two hearts love from distant shores? I guess so, if you've got a good long distance plan. *S*

Tramp Poet
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since 2000-01-06

Posts 754
Could Be Anywhere...

4 posted 2004-07-13 10:01 AM

wow Pat!

such a profound statement for the depths and longing for love. this tugs at the heart
like a letter from one's first love...

daniel

PatAngel
Member

since 2004-04-05

Posts 451
California

5 posted 2004-07-13 10:59 AM

Thank you:

Peaceful_Dreamer
Passing Shadows
PK~
Tramp Poet

Since I am so new at writing poetry, I am not at all sure what the responses will be. All I know is that it comes from the heart. Thank you again for your kind words.

Love,
Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

6 posted 2004-07-15 05:16 PM

Patricia: This is very beauitful and profound! I really enjoyed it!

Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

PatAngel
Member

since 2004-04-05

Posts 451
California

7 posted 2004-07-15 08:11 PM

Thank you Betty Lou for your wonderful response.

Love,
Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

Isobel
Senior Member

since 2004-01-17

Posts 529
Qld, Australia

8 posted 2004-07-16 08:43 AM

Dear Patricia

A very heartfelt poem. Wonderfully versed.

Love Isobel ox

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

9 posted 2004-07-16 11:29 AM

PatAngel ... my special friend~

You KNOW that I love the all of your 'heart-ink'~

'This friendship like tall pines,
growing slowly
till it soars to the heavens'

TREASURE !!!
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

[email protected]

PatAngel
Member

since 2004-04-05

Posts 451
California

10 posted 2004-07-16 12:00 PM

Dearest Marge,

If it hadn't been for your wonderful friendship and little nudge, I doubt I would be writing. Thank you for your love and support!

Love you much,

Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

junemac
Senior Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 1005
uk

11 posted 2004-07-16 05:59 PM

deeply touching and quite haunting too. A beautiful poem.
hugs from June x

PatAngel
Member

since 2004-04-05

Posts 451
California

12 posted 2004-07-17 12:42 PM

Thank you Isobel and June! Your responses are deeply appreciated.
Love,
Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

Beasley
Senior Member

since 2003-11-28

Posts 682
Cheboygan,MI USA

13 posted 2004-07-17 08:55 AM

What a wonderful sensitive poem! It's a great expression of thoughts from the heart.
Love, Barb

PatAngel
Member

since 2004-04-05

Posts 451
California

14 posted 2004-07-17 11:51 AM

Thank you Barb for your lovely response! Most of the thoughts that come from within, seem to be better expressed in poetic form. The more I read other's poems, the more I am inspired to write. You all have such wonderful talents for writing, and I feel so blessed to be a part of this forum.

Love,
Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

15 posted 2004-07-18 01:53 AM

Beautiful and heartfelt writing, Patricia!

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

16 posted 2004-07-18 02:06 AM

Truly lovely. Joyce

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