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Beasley
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0 posted 2004-07-06 11:49 AM



Differences

I sat upon the seashore sandy,
And ate a piece of chocolate candy,
Then built a castle gleaming white
Next to the ocean beaming bright.
Starfish gathered at my feet.
A seahorse came and took a seat.
I gathered oyster and clam shells
And noticed all the water smells.
They’re Different from the ones on land.
I sat awhile and then I planned
To tell a story to the creatures
To let them know how life features
Diversity that lives apart
Joined within a common heart.
Every creature took a stand,
A few of them gave a hand.
Known am I by a different name
Yet, just like you, I am the same.

© Copyright 2004 Barbara Gedman - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-07-06 12:40 PM


a comforting thought
Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2004-07-06 03:46 PM


Barb~
There is a depth to this piece that I'm coming back to explore~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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3 posted 2004-07-06 06:00 PM


Dear Barb:  I liked this.  We most likely all go to the same place!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

Joyce Johnson
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Member Rara Avis
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4 posted 2004-07-06 06:42 PM


How young of spirit you are in your delghtful poetry.  Love, Joyce
midnightblues
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5 posted 2004-07-07 10:40 AM


Hello Barb,

what a nice little poem

Love
MiCheLLe

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Isobel
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6 posted 2004-07-11 07:58 AM


Dear Barb

This is so lovely.  A wonderful verse.

Love Isobel ox


Broken_Winged_Angel
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7 posted 2004-07-11 03:44 PM


I'm bookmarking this, and sending it to a few people.  It's beautiful..

Thank you
BWA

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