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Dear Figment

Wesley the Blue
Member

since 1999-09-02

Posts 426
Forest Lake, MN, USA

0 posted 2004-07-05 06:14 AM

Dear Figment
Why cant you just
Leave me in peace?
your lovely face
haunts my dreams.
You imagined warmnth
Mocks the coldness of my bed.
The laugh I hear
In my head
Echos
In the emptiness
Of my heart.
Please, figment
Taunt me no more
With your false promises
Of an end
To my loneliness.

"No one knows what its like,
To feel these feelings,
Like I do,
And I blame you."
Behind Blue Eyes - The Who

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2004-07-05 10:51 AM

Cute lament. Joyce

midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

2 posted 2004-07-05 12:19 PM

Aww this is so cute! very witty!

Love
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2004-07-05 01:23 PM

Wesley~
I've heard those figments of taunt too~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Beasley
Senior Member

since 2003-11-28

Posts 682
Cheboygan,MI USA

4 posted 2004-07-05 02:27 PM

Nice poem-nice expression of feelings.
Barb

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

5 posted 2004-07-05 03:16 PM

Wesley: Enjoyed your poem.

Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-07-06 02:52 AM

understanding this

junemac
Senior Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 1005
uk

7 posted 2004-07-06 06:37 AM

wow this is so stunning !!! A really profound write with just the right amount of information. Holds the reader and is cleverly written and presented.

wonderful.
Well done !!

Hugs From June x

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