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junemac
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0 posted 2004-07-03 05:33 PM


Pure Opulence like Orchid petals;

and warmed scent of sweet jasmine,

Delicate as the weave of silver cob-webs;

and elusive pattern of melting snowflakes.

Yet as strong as the waves that crash to shore,

or the roots of a hundred year oak.

As dear as the moment of a babies birth,

and the wakening of each new spring.

Your love is everything and all I need,

has the power to move my soul.

Your love is my blood, the air that I breathe,

Let it remain as long as my loving heart beats.


© Copyright 2004 june macfarlane - All Rights Reserved
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Member Patricius
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1 posted 2004-07-03 10:20 PM


Dear June:  Lovely poem!  

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

junemac
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2 posted 2004-07-04 04:41 AM


thanks Betty lou
hugs June x

midnightblues
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3 posted 2004-07-04 12:49 PM


Wow lovely poem! Love iT!

Your love is my blood, the air that I breathe,

Let it remain as long as my loving heart beats.

sooooo romantic..

Love
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

junemac
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4 posted 2004-07-04 01:45 PM


aww thanks Michelle, I am so glad you liked this one. I wrote it with heart and soul.
Hugs from June x

PatAngel
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since 2004-04-05
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5 posted 2004-07-04 02:36 PM


Dear June,

Lovely, heartfelt poem! I really enjoyed reading it.

Love,
Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

junemac
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6 posted 2004-07-04 05:50 PM


Thank you Patricia, you are always so lovely. I look forward to seeing replies here and love this little corner so very much, because of kind people like you.

Hugs from June x

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