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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk ![]() |
This one I have posted because I enjoyed broken winged angels poem. This one is one I had written a while ago. Exposed for all the world to ignore My heart lay naked ,shivering and sore Pain that reminded me of more to come Fresh scars for others to graft upon I shuddered within all my decisions My steps glued with fearsome visions Directionless within a maze of cement Behind me lay footprints , all spent I drank the rose wine without taste Reached for the bottle with less haste Watched the moon in bleached bone white Strip with sickness the stars from my night Chance perhaps or miracle in conception? shook my awake to a renewed perception You stumbled upon my wounds unaware Knelt then cupped my heart with great care You tenderly placed me within reach of the sun To bathe in the warmth of our friendship begun Patiently watching for fresh shoots turn green New hope and courage where a void had been Today I drink the sweet nectar, life’s wine Begin to step out from shadow to shine I took your hand, found once more my direction Safe in your care and your gentle protection I know you will shy from the truth of you More than a friend,, believe me it's true See no-one else took the time or the care Without question your love was always there Please my friend don't turn your face the thanks I give you, accept with grace for you held my hand and all joking apart Forever you will hold a piece of my heart |
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PKreturns Member
since 2003-07-21
Posts 362New Orleans, LA |
This was what i would describe as Romance...you paint a beautiful picture with words June. |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear June: A lovely poem! what a blessing when we find someone who cares what is happening to us! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Awww this is so romantic! ![]() Love MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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Michelle_loves_Mike![]() ![]()
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
mmm,,warm fuzzy feelings,,,nice work kid Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
thanks Michelle, Michelle, Betty lou and PK Alll your wonderful comments have cheered my heart today. hugs from June x |
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PatAngel Member
since 2004-04-05
Posts 451California |
Dear June, This is truly wonderful! What a lovely poem. Patricia 'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go. |
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