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Trillium 
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA 
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Across A Summer Sky Across a summer sky, I see White clouds are racing recklessly. Rolling in a ceasleless motion And I get a sudden notion, I would like to rush like they. Travel many miles away. Endless miles and dizzy heights, Drunk on summer winds and sights That I have never seen before And with the whole world to explore. Imagine soaring over sea With just the moon for company. Bringing earth the gift of rain To renew itself again. Casting shadows and display Many different shapes each day. Then making thunder, lightning too And all the other things clouds do. What a freedom that would be. Up, traveling to infinity! Betty Lou Hebert Published in Rhyme Time Magazine, 1997 |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Lovely imagination Betty. This would certainly be fun. If the airplane had never been invented you would probably invent it. Love, Joyce |
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Beasley Senior Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 682Cheboygan,MI USA |
How enjoyable to read. Your poems are so clever. Love, Barb |
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PKreturns Member
since 2003-07-21
Posts 362New Orleans, LA |
This was definitely fun to read. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Joyce: Thanks so much for your sweet comments. However, I think you are giving me too much credit! The only airplane I could master was a paper one! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Barb: Thanks so much. Want to come along? Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
PKreturns: Glad this was fun for you to read. Thanks. Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Dear dear Betty, i love your poem! its full of optimism and dreams. love it love it!! What a freedom that would be. Up, traveling to infinity! Whaooo  Love MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
sounds fun,,,but, im afraid of heights! lol Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetestBettyLou~ I felt my thoughts soaring with this read~ Such talent you possess~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hi Betty Lou A most beautiful picture unfolded right before my eyes as I read your words. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
MiCheLLe: I replied to your message yesterday but it seems to ahve disappeared! Sorry to be late answering. I always appreciate hearing from you. Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: Thanks and it sounds like fun doesn't it? What freedom that would be! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sue: Thanks and one of the first places I'd go would be to see you in Australia! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ahem ! Sue ... that's AFTER she picks me up in FLORIDA !!!!!!!!!!!!!  ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Michelle: Sorry you're afraid of heights Maybe we could hold hands? Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: You have a deal! I'll drift over and pick you up! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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PatAngel Member
since 2004-04-05
Posts 451California |
Dear Betty Lou, What a terrific imagination! I loved this one! You have such great talent. Love, Patricia 'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Patricia: You are so nice to give me such a compliment! Thanks. Always enjoy hearing from you. Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thanks for the visions |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
passing shadows: Thanks for commenting! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Isobel Senior Member
since 2004-01-17
Posts 529Qld, Australia |
Dear Betty Lou You can take me anywhere... Thank you for the wonderful poetry that you write. Love Isobel ox |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Isobel: Thank you for your kind comments! It would be great fun to have a trip together. Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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