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PKreturns
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0 posted 2004-06-28 01:28 PM


At midnight in the month of June
I stand beneath the silvery moon
The fog flows through and around
As I hear Nature’s mythical sound
From this dream ‘ere do I wake
Walking slowly I behold a lake
Voices murmur softly like angels
From distant mountains and distant dells
I feel terror that is far from fright
As I listen, I fill with delight
Like ghosts, shadows rise and fall
Becoming the night, high as a wall
So great was this solemn loneliness
Like a sweet summer wind’s caress
Something awakens my consciousness, my soul
Like a bell sounding, it begins to toll
That thing like a light, it beckons me
I race along edge of the lake for this melody
Vision of her fills me inside
Rising like thunder, softly it dies
Onward I press, onward I go
Searching while running, and lo,
I behold the creation of this beauty
This paradise, to find, my sacred duty
Like light from jewels floating on black
A vision from mirror uncracked
Immaculate as the morning dew
The vision I behold is you


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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2004-06-28 02:44 PM


PK~
A lovely rhythmical read~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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2 posted 2004-06-28 04:17 PM


A dream like quality.  Joyce
PKreturns
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3 posted 2004-06-28 04:31 PM


Thank you Marge and Joyce...
PatAngel
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4 posted 2004-07-04 01:31 AM


Pk,

What a lovely, magical poem!

Love,
Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

midnightblues
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5 posted 2004-07-04 12:50 PM


oooh nice! magical indeed!

Love
MiCheLLe

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