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Beasley Senior Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 682Cheboygan,MI USA |
The Clean House “Where will I start? Where shall I begin?” Said Mrs. McGee with a sparkly-eyed grin. “I think I’ll tidy just this room.” So she did all the dishes and took out her broom. She swept the floor and decided to scrub The bathroom toilet, sink and the tub. “Well, that not all,” she said with a shrug. She wiped up the floor then vacuumed the rug. All of a sudden my mind starts to roam. So I sat right down and wrote out this poem. I envied her style in a vision of green. That’s the cleanest house I’ve ever seen. I’m not cleaning house, you might as well know it. I ain’t got no time; I’m bein’ a poet. Barb Gedman |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BeasleyGal~ I'm with YOU ! Now this is just plain downright ADORABLE~ Love it ... and YOU~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
How very cute. And I agree, some things are more important than a spotless house. Too bad we can't do it all. Love, Joyce |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Barb: This is so cute! I love it! Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is darling |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Aww Barb this is so cute!  Love MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is adorable, Barb! Can you send Mrs. McGee over to my house when she's done?!  |
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Beasley Senior Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 682Cheboygan,MI USA |
Thanks for reading and all of your great comments. I tried to send Mrs. McGee over to your houses but she is now too busy. She is writing poetry. Love, Barb |
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Isobel Senior Member
since 2004-01-17
Posts 529Qld, Australia |
Dear Barb It is a delight to read your poems. So we all here in PiP appreciate you putting your chores aside to share your poetry with us. Mrs. McGee would agree. Love Isobel |
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Street Heart Member
since 2002-09-05
Posts 349Pennsylvania,USA |
Barb,you made me laugh! It's so funny,I used to be such an organized clean-freak. Everything in its place,etc.Now it's either work,dinner,movie or computer.I never really ever wanted a computer since I knew that it would be an addiction which would steal time away from other things I should be doing.Oh well,instead of vacuuming the rug,I'm enjoying your poetry! An inch of debris,but golly,you're a good writer!  Street Heart If a man has not discovered something he is willing to die for,his life is not worth living. |
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PatAngel Member
since 2004-04-05
Posts 451California |
Dear Barb, I enjoyed this very much. I needed the laughter. Thank you for sharing this delightful poem. Love, Patricia 'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go. |
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