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Tramp Poet
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since 2000-01-06
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Could Be Anywhere...

0 posted 2004-05-10 02:47 PM


Secret Sigh

gentle whisper of gentle heart
sweet voice of promise
friendship that shall endure.
forever fresh, spring breeze
baby bird song, sung along
wing of butterfly; steady, sure.

wild flowers in the meadow
swaying grasses waist tall
white clouded crystal sky.
love resting on bent arm
touching everywhere possible
parted lips with secret sigh.


~~~~~~


© Copyright 2004 Daniel James Burt - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2004-05-10 04:07 PM


Very very beautiful and quite romantic.
Love the waist high grasses.
Much enjoyed the read.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

PatAngel
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since 2004-04-05
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California
2 posted 2004-05-10 08:20 PM


I really enjoyed this lovely poem. It has a nice romantic feel to it. Thank you for sharing!

Love,
Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

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3 posted 2004-05-11 02:14 AM


this poem has such a happy, contented sound.  Joyce
PhaerieChild
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Aloha, Oregon
4 posted 2004-05-11 08:15 AM


Great word painting. Waist high grass, meadows, what a lovely idea. Love ya... Shawna
BloomingRose
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5 posted 2004-05-14 12:43 PM


Wow... beautifully said.

Deb

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