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kaleanna Member
since 2003-08-18
Posts 89TX, USA |
Determined to be strong Determine to be strong though the winds of the storm threaten to bring you down determine to be strong though problems arise that hides rainbows from your eyes determine to be strong though you might be feeling blue and smiles are no where near determine to be strong smile when you want to frown look for the rainbows that are there determine to be strong no matter what life brings to you you're beautiful inside and out determine to be strong for life's to short for unhappiness find the flames that are inside the flame of happiness the flame of love the flame of success its there if you dare to look be so determined to be strong Meesh |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Kaleanna, I like this thoughtful, repetitive admonition to persevere. It works very well together the way you have structured it. Dennis :^) |
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Isobel Senior Member
since 2004-01-17
Posts 529Qld, Australia |
Well done. It came from the heart. Love Isobel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very uplifting! thank you! |
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PatAngel Member
since 2004-04-05
Posts 451California |
Very powerful words! Determine to be strong and you will achieve it, in spite of opposition, stuggle and suffering. Your poem was very inspiring. Thank you for sharing! Love, Patricia |
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