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Tramp Poet
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0 posted 2004-04-17 07:17 PM


Suddenly Clear

Wait!
oh my,,,tis, tis
suddenly so very clear...
Eureka! Inspiration! Why she did it!
Displaying examples... proud of her evil.
Knowing she shall not have the self control
she made a choice... pigpen alone

Was choice noble or selfish?
her sacrifice pure as true love?
Her ultimate love laid upon an alter
sacrifice not acceptable, given in lies

She sees clearly; a poetic destruction
a poet cheerfully given unto his death.
Recognizing;  her addiction's to pigpen
could wink tramppoet out of existence

What she truly knew, anointed of God
she could not bear...  dragging it down.
Protecting;   gives up her very ultimate
unfortunately; was given while deceived

Our dear Father, sometimes so very stern
not of destruction,  always  preservation.
His will  is  of  peace,  reconciliation,  love
as  His...  we  must  display  His forgivness

Suddenly clear!  Why she did it!
She was protecting her beloved.
Acknowledged!  Sacrifice noted!
Shall  we  let our Dad  decide it?


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[This message has been edited by Tramp Poet (04-17-2004 07:53 PM).]

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1 posted 2004-04-17 10:29 PM


I am confused, but the poem was good.
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