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Cloud Kisses |
Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Cloud Kisses I've lived upon a high plateau And watched clouds gather, far below, To mass and swirl, just like a sea, Completely isolating me From everything that lay down there. A feeling quite beyond compare! Then some days, clouds would move up high. Engulf my cabin, so that I Could only see slow, moving gray From every window, through the day! I'd go outside to take a peek And feel moist breath upon my cheek And wonder if there were a few Experiencing cloud kisses, too! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Cloud kisses...what a wonderful way of looking at it. Very much enjoyed this write. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Nancy: It was a strange feeling to be completely engulfed in clouds. When I was outside, it really did feel as though kisses were being rained upon me. Thanks. Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Nice writing. Joyce |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Joyce: Thanks for reading. Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Beasley Senior Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 682Cheboygan,MI USA |
As always, I enjoyed another of your wonderful gifts of expression. Love, Barb |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Barb: Thank you my friend! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Another lovely piece of writing Betty Lou that was so very much enjoyed. Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Sue: Thanks and I always enjoy hearing from you. Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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PatAngel Member
since 2004-04-05
Posts 451California |
Dear Beey Lou, What a lovely poem you wrote. It made me want to go outside and experience Cloud Kisses for myself. And thank you also for making me feel so welcome here. Love, Patricia |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BettyLou~ You are beautiful ... and this is an outstanding piece of your beautiful thoughts~ I love you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
stunningly beautiful! |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Patricia: Thanks for your nice reply to my poem. I know we will enjoy your poetry and hope you will stick around. Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: Thank you for your lovely words and for your love! Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
passing shadows: So nice to hear from you and thanks for reading. Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Sparticus Member
since 2003-11-15
Posts 245 |
I love the message in this, wonderfully done, B. Sparticus |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sparticus: Thank you and nice to hear from you! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Isobel Senior Member
since 2004-01-17
Posts 529Qld, Australia |
Dear Betty Lou You certainly give us a new way of looking at things. Very nice indeed. Love Isobel ox |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Trillium, I love looking at the clouds. This is beautiful. Dawn |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Isobel: When we lived at Scossa, there were days when we were enveloped in clouds. It was 5,600 ft. on the side of a mountain and it was strange to look out the windows and see clouds moving by on each side of the house. Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
DawnG: Thanks for reading. I enjoyed hearing from you. Betty Lou Hebert |
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pictureme Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 248Ohio, USA |
Trillium been there done that and always wanna go back! A beautiful experience, put to words! pictureme :-) |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
pictureme: I'm glad to hear you have shared this same experience. Betty Lou Hebert |
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