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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan 
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stars align to the precise angle my motions had a glow once now the business must be done tilt the axis slightly slide move my pride a bit to the side tried to reside but a tear left my eye so much i just poured out , but not enough or maybe too much ....out of luck dumbstruck tumbleweeds in the streets she said i lost her then , i sure lost her now then if i am found what next hearing that song of sweet winds branches make me bend this will never end ....... |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
oh my, this has left me feeling very sad  you write so lovely i sometimes dont know if i should cheer or cry.... i hope those tumbleweeds show you the way home...she may be lost to you...but, you still speak sweetly.  |
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PassionatelyRomantic Member
since 2004-01-24
Posts 190 |
very nice sad poem  |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
ahh thank you both for the replys , yeah i was feeling that way for sure not to sad though ....thanks again....... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
took me awhile to get over here, but I am glad I stopped in to find you here |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
lol yeah it took me awhile to post anything in here , the ol' pub , low lighting , smokey tunes rolling in the background .... i'm happy you did find these though , some are a bit sad ...i think the pubs a good place for certain writes ,big hugs d...there is always tomorrow babe ... ,james |
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DeviantMechanic Junior Member
since 2004-03-27
Posts 21Oak Grove, KY |
hi im new here i would just like to say that the depth of your plight has touched the bottom of my soul and inspired feelings long ago lost. thank you for your wonderful post. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
The sadness definitely came through, James. Well done! I hope you enjoy the Pub! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
James~ ANOTHER great read~ 'tilt the axis slightly slide move my pride a bit to the side' *sigh* ... I adore that thought~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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