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0 posted 2004-03-14 10:55 PM



angels have wings
one flew by me the other evening
shying away , i tryed to look away
she was right there indeed
how my thoughts flowed to the places
of my liking
why tell these sad storys ?
what should i say ?
oh please ...just stay
hold my hand
feel my heartbeat
again and again
our rhythms meet and react on site
chemical excitment within our bodys
my mind releases nervous energy
cool ....and calming breaths
slow down and relax, be myself
lead the way
suprise me with your smile
good morning giggles
i am a child hee hee
once more were all children, you see
sleep away your past safe in my arms
i will protect the time around us
before you sail away

3/14/04

.......
JDW III

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1 posted 2004-03-14 11:07 PM


"angels have wings "
oh, some of us lost ours in the fall   LOL
*teasing*

this really is such a lovely thought to
read, and even more lovely to imagine  

whoever the angel is may have come from "heaven", but looks like you and her have found "home" right there in your heart. sweet  


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2 posted 2004-03-15 10:01 PM


oh muted ...lolyour so funny and nice too
thanks ...its kinda fantasy - dreamy feel
hugs thanks again m

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3 posted 2004-03-21 08:22 PM


a pleasure to read
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4 posted 2004-03-21 10:34 PM


hey dixie, you know he has a gorgeous heart, im glad to see you like his writing as much as me, and im glad you responded this one...because its very pretty

just thought this one deserved more responses...

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you're right
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6 posted 2004-03-22 09:35 AM


i should have titled this one angels in my mind thanks babes lol
J

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7 posted 2004-03-22 03:00 PM


JWolf~
And NOW you've got the THREE POETIC MUSKEETEERS enjoying this one~

Lovely~

(only one suggestion and ONLY because your 'critique' message asks for it ...) you might wish to check your spelling a 'little' closer .... but the errors/typos in this one did not detract from my enjoyment of it~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~


~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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8 posted 2004-03-22 06:25 PM


excitement
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