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aujussy wolf
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0 posted 2004-03-14 09:10 AM



a streetlight serenade
trainstation runaway,
looking for a ticket home,
destination unknown
two million miles away,
messy hair in the morning sun
the birds chirp... the days begun
as an attractive springtime breeze
lifts up last falls leaves


3/2004
JDW III



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1 posted 2004-03-14 12:24 PM


Two million miles is a mighty long way.  A poignant picture.  Joyce
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2 posted 2004-03-14 01:15 PM


Nice Poem; nice imagery.
Barb

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3 posted 2004-03-14 03:25 PM


I liked your poem.  Very lonesome atmosphere.

Betty Lou Hebert

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4 posted 2004-03-14 03:38 PM


lol yes 2 million miles is a long way
thanks Joyce

Beasly , ahh fellow michiganer i know where you live better be nice , lol just kidding , thanks for reading

Trilly ..lonesome not all the time
glad you liked it ....

-wolf

"It's great to be alive"
JDW I

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5 posted 2004-03-14 07:31 PM


oh, see, this is small but packed with feeling...
I almost missed this little gem

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6 posted 2004-03-14 07:50 PM


thanks lol
hidden gems in the rivers bed

J

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7 posted 2004-03-14 09:38 PM


something about trains and train-stations that stirs the melancholy

enjoyed

If you continue
to think
what you have always thought
you will continue
to get
what you have always got!


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8 posted 2004-03-14 10:56 PM


yes your so right rex, thanks for reading and replying


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JDW III

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9 posted 2004-03-21 08:24 PM


nice imagery
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10 posted 2004-03-21 08:52 PM


thanks d, hugs

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