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We are water.... |
Ladycat
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX |
We are ripples Upon water that flows across the streams of our consciousness Sometimes we are soft and flowing Showing only glimmers of what lies beneath the water Other times the wind blows just right and set us a sail Rolling and flickering Spitting and throwing off pieces of ourselves at others We become waves We move into bigger bodies and then we fade into the rest Love, Ladycat Farewell my forever friend, may safe journeys in life always lead you home. |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Wow this is very brainy I like it Love MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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Beasley Senior Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 682Cheboygan,MI USA |
I agree-it's brainy...and deep. Nice poem. Love, Barb |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
Excellent job and an amazing concept. wonderful !! hugs from june xx |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big angel hugs) Yay! Oh Vynette, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, God Bless You, I love the animation put through your voice, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vynette, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
for the beauty of it~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is indeed a WOW poem... absolutely love it and I'm sending it to my library. Maree Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Lovely indeed. Joyce |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Ladycat: Very interesting and enjoyable to read. Betty Lou Hebert |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
Lady , you have captured the soul of the wave well . i like your viewpoint -wolf |
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pictureme Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 248Ohio, USA |
I loved the flow of this and its completeness! nicely done. pictureme :-) |
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