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Ladycat
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0 posted 2004-02-29 04:30 AM


We are ripples
Upon water that flows across the streams of our consciousness
Sometimes we are soft and flowing
Showing only glimmers of what lies beneath the water
Other times the wind blows just right and set us a sail
Rolling and flickering
Spitting and throwing off pieces of ourselves at others
We become waves
We move into bigger bodies and then we fade into the rest

Love,
Ladycat

Farewell my forever friend, may safe journeys in life always lead you home.

I am
You are
We will always be...
Practical Chewtoys

© Copyright 2004 Vynette M. Charles-Brooks - All Rights Reserved
midnightblues
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1 posted 2004-02-29 06:37 AM


Wow this is very brainy
I like it

Love
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

Beasley
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2 posted 2004-02-29 07:44 AM


I agree-it's brainy...and deep. Nice poem.
Love, Barb

junemac
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3 posted 2004-02-29 08:09 AM


Excellent job and an amazing concept.

wonderful !!

hugs from june xx

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2004-02-29 01:54 PM




(big angel hugs) Yay! Oh Vynette, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, God Bless You, I love the animation put through your voice, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vynette, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2004-04-12 02:48 PM


for the beauty of it~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Dark Angel
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6 posted 2004-04-12 05:00 PM


This is indeed a WOW poem...

absolutely love it and I'm sending it to my library.

Maree

Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder.
(by Virginia Woolf)

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7 posted 2004-04-13 07:16 AM


Lovely indeed.  Joyce
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8 posted 2004-04-13 04:54 PM


Ladycat:  Very interesting and enjoyable to read.

Betty Lou Hebert

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9 posted 2004-04-21 11:26 PM


Lady , you have captured the soul of the wave well .
i like your viewpoint

-wolf

pictureme
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10 posted 2004-04-21 11:48 PM


I loved the flow of this and its completeness! nicely done.
pictureme :-)

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