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Till the Day I Die |
PassionatelyRomantic Member
since 2004-01-24
Posts 190 |
Tho' left unsung thru songs of birds, my love swears in silent verse, tho' love remains unheard in sacred words, the depths of love my heart shall traverse. Like the silence of dawning sun, proves to the conquering night- its unrequited love not yet done, my heart to her, takes this plight. To she alone whom this implies, and to all the best of dark and light, from northern lights to moon lit skies; she is my hearts true delight. From heights of mountains, to width of all encompassing sea, from today's forth begins, my undying pledge to thee. As long as waves do reach common shore, and stars light the summer sky, I swear to her I'll love her more and more- every coming day, till the day I die. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I think your love is not unheard at all but very well announced with this poem. Joyce |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jared~ VERY passionately said~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Smooth flowing-- a very good poem! Grover. |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Jared.. a love that's gloriously romantic is just so liberating! Love MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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Isobel Senior Member
since 2004-01-17
Posts 529Qld, Australia |
Undying love. Such a romantic. I liked this one. Isobel |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Your heart is most faithful and I know your love will forever be blessed by the trust you give, sweet friend, may your deserving heart be loved always, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jared, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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